You like totally like want to like help out yeah!

I am studying journalism at UWS. For an assignment we have to post blogs on our personal student web portal. The whole purpose of the blogging is to get help and feedback on our second feature articles that we are writing.

Would someone like to please inform me what feedback I am going to get off students who have posted blogs such as,

"Hey everyone,
so this is me testing out my blog?? My skills with technology are limited so I'll do my best!"

Consequently I am begging for this blog to help me out.

I promise other posts will be more interesting and as discussed with Edenland, probably controversial but for this one, I am begging for help!

My feature article is on fashion. And like how like pretty and like totally awesome it is and like oh my god did you see the new shoes in Wanted!

No.

Not funny.

Ever.

I am writing a piece on fashion but it is focusing on the mental stability of designers and asks the question of whether or not the industry is to blame for the extremism coming through in high end fashion.

My inspiration comes from the late Alexander McQueen and the direction and designs coming out of his fashion house (now under the gorgeous Sarah Burton).

Also the talent of John Galliano contrasted with his outburst and anti-semetic comments (silly talented man.

I am aiming to interview Australian designer Elliot Ward-Fear whose designs I see as similar to those of Galliano and the McQueen fashion house.

My request to this blogging world is contacts. Does anyone know of a physcologist or expert in the field of fashion or fashion mentality?

Or anyone of interest really who could shed light on my article.

When the article is in editting and the 'oh god i basically have to submit this stage' then I will post it as a blog. I would love some feedback and also to share my work with you!

Have a good day blogging world!

I am off to learn!